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Thursday 21 May 2015

My Information Report About Our Mysterious Neighbour, Mars


                         In Week 5 of Term 2 our class focussed on how to write great information reports.
We wrote about the planet Mars as we are in the middle of learning about Planet Earth and Beyond. Learning how to write a great information report will help us with our self-guided topics in a few weeks time.
Here is my writing, after I have self-assessed and peer-assessed my work.

My Information Report Success Criteria:
Self
Peer
My heading:


is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)


My opening paragraph:


  • says what my report is about in a clear way


  • gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification


  • outlines the main features of the subject


My main paragraphs:


  • have sub-headings where helpful


  • have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)


  • are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject


  • give detailed information (factual descriptions)


  • include specific, technical vocabulary


  • are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)


  • may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information


My end paragraph:


  • draws the report together/sums up my main points


  • may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found



Tuesday 19 May 2015

Baking pancakes

This is my home learning challenge of making pancakes the task for this home learning challenge was:
Help plan and prepare a special meal for your family.
And my mum helped me making pancakes by:
cutting the butter
melting the butter
and more other things.

Monday 18 May 2015

DLO: Planets of the solar system



Hello this is my DLO Planets of the solar system in it it has information of planets that is in our solar system and it is made by me and Nikolai

Friday 1 May 2015

 This is my Thing-link about Anzac day also there are some video here that can tell you some facts about trench warfare and other things and it has also 2 images.